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What's It Gonna Be (Beyoncé Knowles song)[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because it is too short to go to WP:GAN but I'd still like to receive comments on what could be done to improve the article – mostly prose-related issues. Thanks! Gary King (talk) 21:48, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
Fixed a little wording. Not much to improve or work on. Looks good to me.RyanHoliday (talk) 00:22, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
- ThinkBlue's comment
- This sentence ---> ""What's It Gonna Be" was originally released as a promotional recording by Columbia Records and as a physical release with the L'Oréal logo on the cover because of the song's use in Knowles' advertisements for L'Oréal", the statement "physical" release, what exactly does that mean?
-- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 01:30, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Comments by Realist2:
- Do you have a page number for current ref #1?
- Could do with a personnel section at the bottom.
Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs):
"A 7" promo single containing the song along with instrumental and a cappella versions and the same three different versions of Faith Evans' cover of Donna Summer's 1978 "Heaven Knows" (which was part of the official soundtrack to The Fighting Temptations) was released." Run-on sentence.- Any external links (music videos, official lyrics, etc.)?
- Information about themes, music videos, and music features could be put in, only if there's info.
Not many comments, but then, it's a short article. Dabomb87 (talk) 03:32, 7 September 2008 (UTC)