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Voyage of the Damned (Doctor Who)[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to be able to get this up to FA soon. It failed a GA due to prose, but I feel that's the only problem, and it's almost gone with. In any case, I'd like a PR to see if any prose needs editing or tightening.

Thanks, Will ^(talk) 12:43, 29 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Lead needs in info about the Production and reception. Buc (talk) 10:53, 9 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Ruhrfisch comments: Not too much to improve here. I would try and make sure the plot section is told from an out of universe perspective - see WP:IN-U. For example, However, London was evacuated after the general populace fled in fear of a third consecutive attack, and only a few people remain... is unclear - what are the previous two attacks? This is somewhat addressed in the following continuity section, but that does not help here. I also am still not sure why the Captain of the Titanic killed himself. Refs look fine, language is overall decent. Hope this helps and good job, Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 02:43, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]