Wikipedia:Peer review/Vivah/archive1

Vivah

Hello, everyone, could someone have a look at this article. I hope it's referenced well enough (tried only to take newpapers as references). Since I'm one of the few editors to work on this article, please could someone review for:

• POV
• Gossip
• Stuff that simply doesn't belong into the article,

and maybe, someone could rate it and give me ideas how to improve the article further. (I took the featured Star-Wars-articles as role models.) Thanks a ton and best regards, Plumcouch ^Talk2Me 22:05, 29 December 2006 (UTC)

• Perhaps you should use the Template:Cite web (or see Category:Citation templates for other applicable templates) template instead of the current scheme employed. And citations go after the punctuation, and a space follows the citation (e.g., Statement.¹ Next statement.) Pepsidrinka 00:22, 30 December 2006 (UTC)

• Only Fools and Horses is a sitcom and Latter Days is a movie that are current FA candidates. I don't know if they will pass FAC, but their footnotes are done correctly - please look at how the footnotes are formatted. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:52, 30 December 2006 (UTC)

I picked one of the many possibilities to reference/footnote an article and used it on the article. Have a look? --Plumcouch ^Talk2Me 22:08, 30 December 2006 (UTC)