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Uttarakhand

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I've listed this article for peer review because… I want a wholesome review as to how to improve this page so as to make it one of the best articles on this site.

Thanks, [[User talk:ayanosh|T]]☺[[Special:Emailuser/ayanosh|M]] (talk) 21:42, 26 March 2012 (UTC)ayanosh

Redtigerxyz's comments

• FA Karnataka model can be followed in structure and as a reference
• The article suffers too much from WP:RECENTISM. "Chief ministers of Uttarakhand" list and dates of elections is not needed.
• There are many lists in the articles which need to be incorporated in the text format. List of Universities is not needed. Name few prominent ones and give overview
• Transport: list -> text. Add road, rail.
• Tourist destinations: merge list into text
• State only ten most populous cities ("important cities"). Merge in Demographics, may be Format like in Japan#Demographics
• Tourism as an industry needs to figure in Economy
• Add dates in "History". eg. The region was originally settled by Kols in the Xth century CE/BCE. "The Pauravas(years), Kushanas(years) ... have ruled Uttarakhand in turns" Maintain chronology.
• History also discusses people and terrain??

Redtigerxyz ^Talk 18:11, 10 April 2012 (UTC)