Wikipedia:Peer review/USA PATRIOT Act, Title II/archive1

USA PATRIOT Act, Title II[edit]

This is part two of an ongoing effort to get the USA PATRIOT Act up to speed. As this is a work in progress, I'm really asking for a status check to see how things are going. - Ta bu shi da yu 13:25, 27 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

My comments:

Lots of sections are too short, maybe there are too many sections?
The lead is very short considering the length of the article.
The last few sections are empty.
There are a few red links, both in the context and the box at the top.

It looks pretty good so far, keep it up! I can't see much else, though someone might want pictures added, and external links about this title of the Act might be preferable as well. — Wackymacs 07:32, 28 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

A short explanation for the short sections: if you actually look at each of the sections, they correspond with each of the sections of the Act. I was going to fixup the lead section, and then add a summary of the main features of the Act. Then I was going to add commentary from outside parties. The redlinks in the box is because I haven't been able to get started on the other Titles yet :-) Ta bu shi da yu 14:43, 28 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]