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There's No Place Like Home (Lost)

• A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for December 2008.

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to submit it for FAC. I am looking for a general copy-edit/ review of the article. This article is about an episode of Lost and I am looking for a reviewer who isn't too familar with the show because as an avid watcher I can't really gauge what is in-universe and what isn't.

Thanks, Jackieboy87 (talk · contribs) 00:36, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

• Note: While Jackieboy87 probably welcomes my comments, I am not the "reviewer who isn't too familiar" whom he is hoping for.
  I have not read over the article yet, but I do not think that it is yet ready for FAC due simply to lack of some information, e.g. Live + 7 viewers, that Damon considers the scene with Jack and Locke in the greenhouse to be the pivotal moment of the season, that Damon and Carlton went over the whole eighty-five-page script, hoping to edit off twenty plus pages and found at the end that they had only gotten rid of half a page, etc. Due to its scope (and of course, your fantastic editing skills), I believe that this article has the potential to be the next great Wikipedia episode article, like Through the Looking Glass (Lost) was and more recently, The Stolen Earth has quietly become. –thedemonhog talk • edits 01:45, 21 December 2008 (UTC)