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Supergrass discography

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to know if it can be improved.I think it's a pretty good discography list.

Thanks, TwentiethApril1986 (talk) 03:32, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

dihydrogen monoxide

• Some of the references need formatting. Publishers, access dates, and the like.
• "an English alternative rock band from Oxford" - do you really need to say what city they're from?
• "The album reached number 1 in the UK where it stayed three weeks.[1] The album lead the band to numerous awards in the following years" - repetition of "the album" is bad for readability, and it'd be good to be more specific on these awards
• Rest of the lead needs some copyediting

dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 01:51, 24 May 2008 (UTC)