Wikipedia:Peer review/Randall Flagg/archive8
Randall Flagg[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because I have been working on this article for years and my goal is to see it achieve featured status someday.
Thanks, CyberGhostface (talk) 19:27, 27 January 2017 (UTC)
- I don't have knowledge of this series but I could see some issues I'll point out. Try using my FA Allen Walker as a guide consider it became FA in late 2016.
- How about starting as
- The lead uses quotes and references which is a bit disapproved by guidelines. Try generalizating some of those parts.
- Try balancing the lead with each paragraph covering something from the main article.
- Remember to reference as much as possible (the The Dark Tower series section is lacking too much).
- How come there is no a reception section? Does the comic project's guidelines say nothing about how the media received the character? I'm a little confused. Some parts from characterization could be used in the creation section.
That's all I could find. By the way, I would appreciate if you could comment on my own peer review, Wikipedia:Peer review/D.Gray-man/archive1. Good luck with the article.Tintor2 (talk) 21:19, 30 January 2017 (UTC)
- There was a reception/critical reaction section but they were eventually moved to the characterization section by other editors during another peer review. Thanks for the comments, I'll take a look at yours.--CyberGhostface (talk) 21:59, 31 January 2017 (UTC)