Wikipedia:Peer review/Princess Alice of Battenberg/archive1

The article is well-written and well-sourced. Any suggestions towards improving the article's quality? Deucalionite 16:53, 4 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

You may wish to amend these minor points:

expand/edit the lead so that it is a summary of the article
check that Marie zu Erbach-Schönberg was titled Countess (Gräfin) (after her husband) rather than Princess (Fürstin) (after her higher birth title)
stub Marie zu Erbach-Schönberg (or remove the red-link), ditto for Stylianos Gonatas
check that "their wedding was one of the last great gatherings of the descendants of Queen Victoria and Christian IX of Denmark before World War I." WWI was 10 years later, what about the 1905 Spanish or 1913 Berlin weddings or the funerals of Edward VII of the United Kingdom or George I of Greece?
cite "she was typically referred to as Princess Aliki"
explain the relationship between Rachel and Haimaki Cohen
add source information to the main photograph

DrKiernan 12:28, 12 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]