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Pilot (30 Rock)

• A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for June 2008.

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to begin getting it ready for FA but I know it is FAR from it now. Does anyone have any suggestions of what needs to be added, what needs to be taken away and what needs to be expanded?

Thanks, Jamie jca (talk) 23:50, 1 June 2008 (UTC)