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PJ Harvey

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I've listed this article for peer review because PJ Harvey is a charting English artist who's article has been rated as one of high quality. The article's citations are in check as well. I think PJ Harvey would make a splendid featured article and I was surprised to see that it had not been yet. I plan nominate the article to be featured if the peer review shows that it's high enough quality.

Thanks, Mrmoustache14 (talk) 04:05, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

Brianboulton comments:

I have been looking at citations and references. There are a number of issues:-

• Citations apparently lacking in the text. This may be partly due to misplacement of citations, but you should check the following:-

• Automatic Dlamini: Last part of first paragraph, whole of second paragraph
• Stories from the City etc: Last sentence of first paragraph
• White Chalk and Let England Shake: Final phrases of first paragraph

• Reference formats and related issues: I have only checked out the first of the three columns, and it is likely that the issues identified here will recur in the following two columns:

• check link Ref 7 (links to a blank page)
• Ref 9 also links to a blank page. Also, it needs to be formatted
• Ref 11: page numberneeds to be clarified
• Ref 12: Why is http://www.jphuntley.co.uk/pjh/FullPages/fullbiography.htm a reliable source?
• Ref 13: Where is the transcription referred to available? Has it been published?
• Ref 15: Why is this source reliable?
• Ref 16: Why is this source reliable: The page looks distinctly amateurish
• Ref 18: I'm not clear as to the physical form of this source.
• Ref 20: Same query as 13
• Ref 22: Format problems (bolded date)
• Ref 28: Links to "page not found"
• Ref 29: Format problems (open-ended quote marks; if this is a book title it should be italicised, ISBN missing)
• Ref 30: Magazine title should be italicised
• Ref 36: To what do the page numbers refer in this ref?

I have not been abe to check out the prose, but you need to work on the above. Brianboulton (talk) 16:17, 4 December 2012 (UTC)