Wikipedia:Peer review/One Rincon Hill/archive1

One Rincon Hill[edit]

I have been working on this article for quite a while, or maybe almost one year. It is still not complete and any suggestions on how to improve this article are welcome. I am also looking for any good references that could be used to develop this article more. An assessment of the article is welcome too. Hydrogen Iodide 05:43, 3 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Review from Spebi

The article definitely needs more sources – if you can't find many Internet news articles, try purchasing a local newspaper and cite that as a source. You also need to properly cite all of the current references properly, either manually, or use {{cite web}}. Sentences like "Upon completion and due to its height, this will be the most significant addition to the San Francisco skyline in over 30 years and the tallest all-residential tower west of the Mississippi River." can be hugely misleading if incorrect, so you need to decide whether it is speculation, or fact. If fact, add source.
The {{expand}} tag at the bottom of the page needs to be placed at the top.
The "Links" section needs to be renamed to "External links".
There are a lot of spaces between different sections (Between criticism, Developer and Gallery).
You need to rename the images in the Gallery section to proper titles, and not the default camera titles (e.g. DSCN6861.jpg needs to be renamed to One Rincon Hill at sunset.jpg or similar).
The sections with no content under them need to be removed, or placed between  tags.

With a bit of luck, and these things achieved, you might just get the article to B-grade status. Good luck :) Sebi _[talk] 06:11, 3 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

So far I have removed the empty sections, renamed Links to External links, deleted the spaces. As for the images, I don't think they could be renamed, or am I wrong on that? The reason why the {{expand}} tag is on the botton is because of this unresolved issue about tags. I will try to do the remaining task when I have the time, thanks anyway for the review. Hydrogen Iodide 06:26, 3 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Uploading the same image under a different name, and copying and pasting the current image description page, then tag the old image page with speedy deletion (Images and media, redundant or something). Sebi _[talk] 06:29, 3 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]