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Omkar Nath Sharma "Medicine Baba"[edit]

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I have listed this article for peer review with an intention to improve this article for GA status. I had updated the article and added media. I invite further assistance , information , suggestions to improve the article.
Thanks, One life to live (talk) 12:08, 17 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Ugog Nizdast

I'm fairly familiar with the Good article criteria and can help with this. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 11:15, 4 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Copyvio concern: It appears that significant portions of the text is copied from The Hindu article. See WP:PARAPHRASE and WP:COPYVIO. You better reword those areas.
  • Coverage: The article short, is it possible to expand it further? Though length is not a GA criteria, it still may be a concern. Aren't there more references available?
  • Structure: See WP:ORDER, content is divided into Lead and body-which is further divided into sections. Write the lead section which adequately summarises the rest of the content. Also divide the content into relevant sections if possible. This would all be easier if you expanded it first.
  • Links: Please introduce suitable wikilinks to other articles, for help, see WP:UNDERLINK. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 11:15, 4 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]