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Number-one albums of 1985 (U.S.)

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I've listed this article for peer review because…I would like to have suggestions be made for the article to try and aim the article to Feature list status. I am specially concern about the size of the lead, I think that maybe it's too long. Thank you.

Thanks, Frcm1988 (talk) 07:39, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

The list is generally good but need some copy editing before featured list:

• The start of the second paragraph is misleading "There were 14...". This number didn't change as I understand and should be copyedited to " The chart included 14 1985 number-one albums " or anything that is better.

• I wrote that way for consistency: List of number-one Billboard Top Latin Albums of 1999 and all the other Billboard Latin Albums are featured lists, and all are arranged in that way.

• "In May, Like a Virgin" needs to be copyedited

• Done

• Big problems with references: You have multiple references linking to the same page but have different dates like the one of September 7 and August 31. The reference should be changed from to reduce the number of references. Yo u have done it that every two weeks have the same reference but a different date. This should be changed as the publication date was done on one day so this is one of the biggest problem in this list. I will try and do some references so you can see how it should be done.

• Fixed

• You should also clarify why the paragraphs are divided that way.

• The paragraphs are divided only because of the lentgh of the entire article.

--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 14:25, 23 January 2009 (UTC)