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I've listed this article for peer review because I've greatly expanded and rewritten it.

Thanks, GravityIsForSuckers (talk) 21:46, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:LEAD, the lead should be a summary of the article. Currently, this lead contains novel information and sources not found in the main article body. The information currently there should be integrated into the body. When writing a lead, a helpful guideline to ensure it is a good summary of the article is to make sure each section of the article is somehow covered in the lead.
The body is a bit WP:Proseline in parts. Smaller paragraphs should be combined and written so it reads less as a series of dates.
In general the prose could be varied a bit more, there are for example a lot of sentences starting with "She".
One or two more images wouldn't go amiss, there's a couple of decent options on Commons.
In Honors and Awards it would be worth listing the Eurovision winning song to match the other items in the list which all list the relevant songs.

Best, CMD (talk) 11:16, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]