Wikipedia:Peer review/National Lampoon's Animal House/archive1

National Lampoon's Animal House[edit]

I think that this article of this classic comedy could use some improving and make it into a truly great article deserving of FA status. I would like others to take a look and offer some suggestions as to how this article could be improved. Count Ringworm 15:08, 2 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Lose the trivia, cultural influences, goofs sections. Rewrite all those bulleted lists as prose. Most importantly use inline refs for every declaration of fact. Cheers. L0b0t 15:20, 2 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Compare with some FA films here.Kaisershatner 15:43, 3 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 23:05, 5 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]