Wikipedia:Peer review/My Musical/archive1
My Musical[edit]
I've been working on this article, heading towards GA, and possibly in the future FA, status. I'm looking for overall anything and everything that could or should be done to the article. Thanks so much! --Gpollock 06:33, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
- I think this article is good enough to pass GA, but there are some ways you can improve it.
- For example, some of the paragraphs are very short, consisting of only one sentence at times. It would be better to merge some paragraphs.
- Did a fair bit of merging. --Gpollock
- You make references to earlier episodes made in the show. For example, in, "The Rant Song", you say, "Janitor's section in this song ("It all started with a penny in the door") refers to an incident in Scrubs' pilot, "My First Day."" As someone who does not watch, Scrubs, it is a bit confusing. In this case, I would advice using the cite episode reference template. See Wikipedia:Citation templates.
- Attempted to make that reference clearer, and changed other ones to footnote citations. --Gpollock
- The image "My Musical.jpg" does not have a fair use rational. One needs to be added.
- Replaced the image with fair use-compatible Image:Scrubs My Musical.jpg, which has a rationale. --Gpollock
- For example, some of the paragraphs are very short, consisting of only one sentence at times. It would be better to merge some paragraphs.
- ISD 07:01, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for the help. --Gpollock 21:33, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
