Wikipedia:Peer review/Metropolis (1927 movie)/archive1

Metropolis[edit]

I think this article has a lot of interesting information, but is really a mish-mash. Other than a lack of organisation, can anybody think of other ways to improve the article? --Alexs letterbox 10:10, 30 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Needs references, plus the images (certainly the first two) would look better with descriptive subtitles ie "Set in 2026, the iconic Gothic skyscrapers set the tone of the film" or something better :D. Finally, a critical acclaim section at the bottom, highlighting the films success / popularity (of lack of), should see it right! --PopUpPirate 11:43, July 30, 2005 (UTC)

It looks good, but needs some work. It needs more on the films background and inspirations. How did it grow out of Lang's previous work? How did it relate to other films of the era? Where was it filmed and who funded it? The "Influence" section also devolves into something of a list of references to the film. It needs to be tied together into a cohesive narrative. The lead also needs to be somewhat expanded. - SimonP 01:17, July 31, 2005 (UTC)