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Mark Steel's in Town

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm trying to get it nominated for FA. I am not sure what needs to be included or improved to the article in order to get it promoted, so any advice would be useful.

Thanks, ISD (talk) 14:31, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Finetooth comments: This is interesting, but I doubt that it's comprehensive, and its only image is about to be deleted. These two problems alone make the idea of FA seem remote at the moment. I have a few suggestions for improvement.

• The lead image is tagged for removal on or after today (14 July 2009) on grounds that the license claim is unsupported. You'll either need to address the license question or find one or more new images.

• Since the material is so thin here, I wonder if it would be possible to add a "Biography" section with information about Mark Steel. What else has he done? How old is he? Where does he live? How did he land a spot on BBC Radio 4? Is he involved in projects other than this particular show?

• A bit of background for non-UK readers might be helpful. Where are these towns? What is their distance from London? How big are they exactly? Would it be possible to include a map?

• Are more shows planned? If so, when and where?

I hope these few suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog. That is where I found this one. Finetooth (talk) 15:27, 14 July 2009 (UTC)