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Mahavira[edit]

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to know how this article can be further improved, possibly to at-least meet Good Article Criteria.

Thanks, Rahul Jain (talk) 18:04, 13 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Redtigerxyz's comments
  • The main problem is references. The article is filled with [citation needed] tags
  • Major aspects missing:
    • Worship/Veneration: festivals
  • Short sections (1 para) should be merged
  • Jargon: nirvana (died..), arihant

Frankly, needs work of work for GA status. --Redtigerxyz Talk 06:04, 21 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]