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M15 Halftrack[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because it might need fixing for minor grammar mistakes and MoS errors. I hope to send this to FAC one day. The article is currently undergoing an A-class review, but since no one has been commenting for several weeks, I've chosen to send it here. The article is currently GA status. Please feel free to comment.

Thanks, Tomandjerry211 (talk) 00:44, 8 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Freikorp[edit]

Since there doesn't appear to be an article on the American T28, it might be a good idea to reword the lead "It evolved from the T28 project" to better explain what the T28 project was.
Quotebox - 'An army report from North Africa'. Can you be more specific when attributing this report? The persons name and the date of the report would be helpful.
I found it on Weapons of Patton's Armies, it just said "an army report from North Africa"--Tomandjerry211 (talk) 11:21, 11 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Fair enough. Freikorp (talk) 14:14, 11 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Reading the article left me curious to know what became of the 2000 odd vehicles. Have you found any information on this? I.e were most of them modified, sold as scrap or donated to museums etc?
No info on this for now. -- Tomandjerry211 (talk) 20:16, 11 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Very well written and well researched article - I enjoyed reading it. Freikorp (talk) 01:37, 11 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]