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List of awards and nominations received by Casting Crowns

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get this to FL status and I already have an article being reviewed there. Hopefully this can get most of the kinks out before any eventual FL nomination. Toa Nidhiki05 23:02, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

Comments:

• Looking at other featured lists of awards and nominations, it seems that the citations are generally grouped after the introductory sentence(s) for each section. Thus I would think about moving the citations from the end of each award result to the end of the prose that introduces each section. See List of awards and nominations received by 50 Cent or List of awards and nominations received by Aerosmith, etc.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 19:50, 16 July 2012 (UTC)

• I would recommend archiving all the links in the references using webcitation.org. Not all FLs seem to have this, but it can't hurt.

• I would replace the "and" between Juan DeVevo (guitars) and Hector Cervantes (guitars) in the lede with a comma. The sentence is harder to parse with multiple "and" constructions, and I don't think you lose any of the meaning with this change.
  • Done; I'm not sure why I wrote it like that. Toa Nidhiki05 18:37, 16 July 2012 (UTC)

Other than these things, it looks up to FL standard, as far as I can tell.--Batard0 (talk) 08:17, 16 July 2012 (UTC)