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List of Toronto Raptors head coaches[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because this article/list is too short to attain FL status and therefore must undergo a peer review for the future featured topic nomination of lists of NBA head coaches. Two general notes: 1) Although I am not the primary contributor, the creator of the article, SRE.K.A.L.24, said that I could nominate it. 2) I am aware that the article has already been peer reviewed; however, it has undergone substantial changes since then, and I want to ensure that it is still of high quality. Thanks, Dabomb87 (talk) 01:30, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

The first four references need to have their placements fixed.

Check if I did what you were saying. -- [[SRE.K.A.L.|L.A.K.ERS]] 03:42, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"The Raptors formerly played their home games at the SkyDome (now known as the Rogers Centre)." – From when to when?

The sentence after says ACC was their home since 1999. -- [[SRE.K.A.L.|L.A.K.ERS]] 03:42, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"They moved to the Air Canada Centre, where they have played since 1999." – "In 1999, they moved to the Air Canada Centre."

Done. -- [[SRE.K.A.L.|L.A.K.ERS]] 03:42, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Gary King (talk) 02:52, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

[1] Gary King (talk) 03:49, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comment

I helped write it and think it is a great list, but I reviewed it again because User:Dabomb87 asked me to. I can't find any faults, though you may want to change the work of the ref from Basketball-Reference to basketball-reference.com to keep the head coach lists.—Chris! _ct 23:12, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I think "Basketball-Reference" is cleaner than giving the web address. Eventually, I will change the other lists. Dabomb87 (talk) 23:14, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  - That works too—Chris! _ct 23:19, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: You may wish to attend to the point that four sentences in the first paragraph of the lead begin: "The Raptors...." Some rephrasing is advisable. Brianboulton (talk) 09:07, 12 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]