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Lightning protection system

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I've listed this article for peer review because it could use some help.

Thanks, Tdreyer1 (talk) 21:40, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

The two issues that jump out at me is lack of a history perspective and the lack of much comparison between different systems. How long have these various systems been around and where did the ideas behind them come from? Why would someone use a certain system? Is one cheaper? Or easier set-up? Or more reliable? Also I have problems with the structure of the article. There not much natural flow between the sections. "Risk assessment" should be the first section and be expanded to explain the risk of lighting strikes and renamed to something more general. I imagine most people would understand the fire hazard but I imagine there is more damage that can be done by lighting than just the chance of a fire started. Electrical equipment fried for example.--BirgitteSB 22:48, 10 July 2008 (UTC)