Wikipedia:Peer review/Leslie Nielsen/archive1

Leslie Nielsen[edit]

Hey all, this has been a small side project for me over the last few months. It started as a very disorganized page and I decided to play around with it for fun. You can see how cluttered the page looked here [1] to see how greatly it has changed. I realize that the sections "recent work" and "achievements" need to be expanded or mixed into the article itself; I'm only hoping for suggestions as to how to continue to approve the article. Personally, I don't think it's ready or capable of becoming, at this time, a Featured Article as its been rather difficult to find any outside, published references for him. However, in the very least, I would like to get this qualified for Good Article and then consider its future growth from there. Thanks in advance for your reviews. --Ataricodfish 22:36, 15 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Looks quite good so far. Could the footnotes be numbered rather than just bullet points as it makes it easier to work out which is which? Also isn't he deaf? Surely this should be in the article, unless it's just a myth. RicD o d 11:08, 22 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

RicDod, Thanks for the review. The footnotes are a good point, so I've changed the format to numbering. You are right that he's deaf, too, as I remember an interview with him discussing how it effected his work on Scary Movie 4. I will look into this while I'm working on the close of the article, which admittingly still needs work. Thanks again!--Ataricodfish 13:51, 22 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]