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Jessica Simpson discography[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel that this article has been improved nicely. I need extra suggestions to make this article good for a FL nomination.

Thanks, Novice7 ^(Talk) 14:16, 4 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Simpson's debut album Sweet Kisses was released... There should be a comma after "album" and before "was".
released by Columbia Records on... "Through" not "by"
on November, 1999., poor English, "in November 1999" no comma and no "on"
There should be a hyphen between twenty and five
The album sold about 1.9 million copies[3] in the US produced three singles. The reference [3] needs to be after the period.
...RIAA.[4][5]The third single from the album... Space at beginning of sentence.
Add link to single (single (music)) the first time the word is mentioned.
"I Think I'm in Love with You" reached number twenty one in the US comma after the song name.
released in June, 2001 delete comma.
dated June 5, 2001 deleted this
first week dated June 5, 2001[6][7] and was certified Gold by RIAA.[2] [6][7] should be at the end of the sentence
Irresistible sold 755,000 copies in the US[3] and spawned two singles. [3] Should be at end of sentence.
The title track reached number fifteen in the US and also reached top twenty in many international markets. Two things: insert "album's" before "title track" and place reference [4] at the end of the sentence.
In July, 2002 Simpson released her first remix album titled This Is the Remix. Remove the comma between July and 2002 and place a comma after 2002.
Simpson's third studio album was released in August, 2003. Add comma after album abd remove comma between August and 2003.
{{xt|The album reached number two in the US[1] and was certified three times platinum by RIAA.[2] Move reference [1] to end of sentence.
Simpson's seventh single "With You" reached Add comma before and after "With You".
fourteen in the US[4], and comma goes before reference [4]
album's re-release[9], a cover comma goes before reference [9].
In November, 2004 Simpson released her remove comma between November and 2004.
Add link to Christmas album.
After switching record label to Epic Records[10], in August 2006 Simpson released her fifth studio album A Public Affair. reword.
The album has sold just over 300,000 copies in the US[3] and spawned three singles Reference [3] at end of sentence.
a cover of Nancy Sinatra's "These Boots Are Made For Walkin' originally Comma after song name AND the Apostrophe should be a quotation mark.
film The Dukes of Hazzard in which Simpson co-starred[11], reached number fourteen reference [11] should go after the comma.
The title track, released add "album" before "title track".
album, also reached number fourteen[4] in the US and topped the US Billboard Hot Dance Club Play.[4]. Delete reference [4] after fourteen and remove spare period after reference [4].
a country imprint of Columbia Records[13], and released Do You Know Two things: reference [13] should go after comma and comma should go after "Do You Know"
lead single "Come On Over", reached Remove comma
five in the US Billboard Hot 100[4] and number eighteen in the US Billboard Hot Country Songs[4]. remove reference [4] after "US Billboard Hot 100" and the period should go before reference [4].
October, 2010 Sony Music released a compilation remove comma after October.
album v Playlist: The Very Best of Jessica Simpson "titled" should be "entitled".
christmas album titled Happy Christmas is entitled, not titled.
scheduled for a November 2010 release[16] period before reference [16]

Done Novice7 ^(Talk) 11:46, 6 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Albums

The whole graphic design goes against WP:DISCOGRAPHY, see Slipknot discography for a great example.
Their are only 13 columns in Do You Know, when there should be 14.
Do You Know peaked at #1 on the U.S. Billboard Top Country Albums chart. reference needed.
Softpak albums should not have a "Notes" section.

Done Novice7 ^(Talk) 11:25, 7 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Singles

The whole graphic design goes against WP:DISCOGRAPHY, see Slipknot discography for a great example.
"Singles" and "Promotional singles" should be merged together.
"A Little Bit" was only released outside the United States. reference needed.
Come On Over" also peaked at #18 on the US Billboard Hot Country Songs. reference needed.
"Remember That" also peaked at #41 on the US Billboard Hot Country Songs. reference needed.
Released only to promote the album. TV Shows performances. reference needed.
Released only in Brazil, through the soundtrack of "As Filhas Da Mae." reference needed.
Promotional single only in the US. reference needed.
Released only in Christmas days, in U.S., Canada, UK ,Australia and Asia. reference needed.
Released only to US and Canada Country Radio stations. reference needed.
Opening Theme to "The Price of Beauty". Promotion of the series only. reference needed.

Removed the links to promotional singles as there are no sources Novice7 ^(Talk) 11:25, 7 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Miscellaneous appearances

Rename to "Other appearances"

Done Novice7 ^(Talk) 11:46, 6 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Videography

List of music videos, showing year released and director(s) remove this
Add ""—" denotes items which were not released in that country or failed to chart." to the bottom of the DVDs graph.

Done Novice7 ^(Talk) 11:46, 6 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Other

I don't see any problems with the references, but Amazon might be challenged as a reliable source.
I didn't check the verifiability of the references, so I hope it's accurate...
File:Jsimpsondsc00203.jpg needs more information on it. I strongly suggest using Template:Information.

Eveything's fixed. Discography updated per DISCOGSTYLE

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