Wikipedia:Peer review/Interstate 5/archive1

What steps need to be taken to make this article a GA? --Rschen7754 (talk - contribs) 21:12, 11 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 18:00, 12 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

It looks pretty good, although a few of the sentences seem a little long. Here's a few comments:

The history section doesn't cover the actual construction of I-5 and seems pretty brief. Compare to the GA article U.S. Route 66, for example.
Most of the notes section could be readily merged into the text, providing some content other than the general trip-report nature of most of the content. However, some of the notes will definitely need references.
How does I-5 compare with the other interstate freeways in the U.S.? Can that be mentioned in the text?
At the border with Mexico, does I-5 connect with a highway in that nation? I wasn't able to determine from the text.

Thanks. — RJH (talk) 19:34, 26 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, AZ _t 18:02, 12 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]