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Harry and the Potters[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because, assistance in the article would be appreciated. The article is currently of Good Article status, and Feature Article status is what I want to give to the article. To anyone reviewing the article, please suggest edits, other related page creations, etc. All constructive criticism is definitely acceptable.

Thanks, Hpfan9374 06:22, 12 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 21:11, 13 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Done Hpfan9374 06:54, 16 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Not a full review, but a quick comment or two. The image of the "Potter Mobile" doesn't quite line up with the relevant text. Would it make more sense to move it to where the audio sample is, then move that sample down to the section that talks about music?
Done Moved it to appropriate places. Hpfan9374 08:10, 11 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The article could also have a more thorough intro as per WP:LEAD. Best of luck! --Midnightdreary 20:58, 25 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Done Hpfan9374 06:54, 16 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]