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Halo Wars

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A massive Halo media topic is being built, and this is one of the articles that needs to be peer reviewed for it to pass. This is an unreleased game, and so please take a look for prose issues, fair use issues, and any gaps of information. Thanks much! Judgesurreal777 (talk) 23:11, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

• Comments by Sillyfolkboy
  • I did a couple of minor fixes to the article.
  • Similar to New Halo Project - Not much to comment on really, all information seems good and present. Do not expand more on rumours/speculation about the development as information tends to be completely useless/irrelevant a few months later. As more info is announced (official no rumour) add that to the article.
  • Once real reviews are made available I would reduce what is currently in critical reception to the first sentence followed by the citations of the rest of the material.
  • Do not attempt to add this article or New Halo Project to a featured Halo topic until they are brought up to at least GA standard (nigh on impossible until the game is released). Try making Halo (series) a featured article first.

If you found this peer review helpful please consider doing one yourself. Choose one from the backlog, where i found this article or take a look at WP:Peer Review.

Thanks. Sillyfolkboy (talk) 15:02, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

You completely misunderstand, these articles must be added to the featured topic we are creating, and since they are not released yet, they must be peer reviewed. Judgesurreal777 (talk) 19:27, 12 August 2008 (UTC)