Wikipedia:Peer review/Expulsion of non-resident Tamils from Colombo/archive1

Expulsion of non-resident Tamils from Colombo[edit]

This incident attracted a lot of media attention. Drew a lot of criticism. Also brought a lot of emotion to the diaspora community. As it is a very emotional topic to some I want it to be checked for grammar, WP:RS, WP:NPOV and style. Anything else is also welcome. Thanks in advance Watchdogb 04:15, 6 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 09:14, 20 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. I have fixed some errors as per the suggestin. Still need more review :) Watchdogb 13:34, 21 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]