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Elimination Chamber[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because this article was a Good Article for about a week and then delisted. What can I do to make it a GA again and this time make it stay one longer.

Thanks, Voices in my Head WWE 00:47, 16 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Bradley0110

Please see Finetooth's comments from the 3rd peer review. Many suggestions for improvement have not been approached (providing a short background to professional wrestling, distinguishing between fiction and reality).
Please see the most recent GAR in which the issue of referencing was raised; the article still relies heavily on primary sources from WWE and the whole "Match history" section is unreferenced.
The language could be smoothed in places, e.g. instead of "prior to", just say "before".

Bradley0110 (talk) 17:52, 3 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]