Wikipedia:Peer review/Djungarian hamster/archive1

Djungarian hamster

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I've listed this article for peer review becauuse I want to know how to improve the article so I can nominate it for a GA review. I don't know if it's ready yet.

Thanks, Puffin ^{Let's talk!} 12:03, 6 August 2011 (UTC)

Brief comments from Nikkimaria

• Be consistent in whether you use British or American spellings - for example, you use both "grey" and "gray". See WP:ENGVAR. Done
• It's generally good practice to avoid image galleries where possible - see WP:Galleries  Done
• File:Pallas_Peter_Simon_1741-1811.png: source?  Done
• The article is in need of some copy-editing - you might consider asking WP:GOCE to take a look  Done By SuperHamster
• WP:OVERLINK - don't link very common terms, and don't link the same terms more than once, particularly not in close proximity  Done
• Should provide conversions of metric measurements to imperial - you can use {{convert}} for this purpose  Done
• Generally speaking, bulleted lists should be written out as prose  Done
• References should be more complete: book citations need authors, dates, titles, publishers, and page numbers, web citations need publishers and retrieval dates, etc. See WP:CITE  Done

This is a good start, but the article needs some additional work before going for GA status. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:34, 8 August 2011 (UTC)