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Discography of Final Fantasy XII[edit]
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I'm listing this article for peer review for preparation for FAC, hopefully following in the footsteps of Discography of Final Fantasy VII. This is an article, not a list, and I have a page about the sources used in the article here. Any comments/criticism would be welcome. Thank you! --PresN (talk) 05:08, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
- Comments
- The lead needs some citations, especially for "However, several reviewers commented on the town and battle themes, finding them to be some of the soundtrack's strongest areas"
- Leads don't need citations if the information appears in the body of the article. The Prince (talk) 16:22, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- Kiss Me Goodbye section need more citations, especially this line, "The only vocal piece in the game, it was set to tunes composed by Nobuo Uematsu, arranged by Kenichiro Fukui and produced by Motoki Matsuoka."
- "while several felt that it was a good soundtrack but lacking in substance, others disagreed, finding it to be an excellent album, though not without a few faults." -Who thought these things? Also, this sentence is choppy
- ""filler" tracks" -Specialized terminology should be avoided in the lead. See WP:LEAD
- The first paragraph of the Soundtrack system needs citations
- No need to wikilink dates any more - this has been deprecated. WP:DATE
- Would it be possible to add ratings for the soundtrack in the reception area, similar to what is used in video game articles? It would be a great addition to the article.
- Also, would it be possible to add sound clips to the article?
This looks like a great article and I hope it is promoted to FA status soon. If you have any questions or comments, feel free to leave them on my talk page. Z1720 (talk) 00:03, 20 September 2008 (UTC)