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Cécile Vogt-Mugnier

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In addressing clean-up issues, I have expanded and organized this page on an important neuroscientist. The article is currently rated as a "B-class" article, but I would like it to go higher. It has received little editing since it was updated 10 months ago, so a review would be the best way to impartially address issues with the article.

Thanks, Iamozy (talk) 15:03, 20 March 2015 (UTC)

Comments from 1bandsaw

Iamozy, this is an nice article about a very interesting scientific pioneer. Here are a few suggestions for improving:

General

• There is no citation on her birth or death dates in the infobox or in the article, and the cited date of her death in the article only includes the year.

Research Contributions

• From a biographical standpoint, it might be of interest to note where she was living and working while doing this work. Which institution was she doing this at? The same ones that she and her husband founded in the next section? Who paid for her work? This is particularly relevant for the note about clashing with the Nazi party, which seems to imply she was working in Germany.
• Was this work solo, or was she part of/leading a team?
• The first paragraph does not have a citation for most of its content.

Family

• No citations on the information about their daughters.

Personality

• The statements after the first blockquote ("According to Klatzo...") do not have any citation.
• It is unclear who the final quote in this section is quoting.

I look forward to learning more about her! 1bandsaw (talk) 18:02, 21 March 2015 (UTC)