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Atlantis: The Lost Empire

Previous peer review

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because after two recently failed FA nominations. I and several others have put forth intensive work in improving it further but before I try a FA nom again, I would like to kindly ask other editors to look the article over for any improvements which they see it could use before it goes to FAC again. Thank you for your time and input. DrNegative (talk) 06:17, 4 January 2012 (UTC)

• You might want to (also) list it with the film peer review people, BTW. Allens (talk) 17:48, 25 January 2012 (UTC)

Loved that movie. According to the FA review, it needs a good eye. Gimmie a couple of days for this, though. ResMar 01:45, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

Lead

• in his final role before what, his death?
  • Fixed. DrNegative (talk) 05:33, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
• Set in 1914 before or after WWI?
  • It was never explicitly stated in the film whether it was before or during. Any input would probably be speculation or original research. DrNegative (talk) 05:33, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
    • A good spot for a footnote, but alright. ResMar 23:44, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

Plot

• She's lifted off and then what.
  • Clarified. DrNegative (talk) 05:33, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
• You should probably mention the sphere of protection.
  • Added. DrNegative (talk) 05:33, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
• I've made some changes to the prose, you should make sure I didn't screw anything up.
• What about the discovery of the air vehicles?
  • Added to the plot. DrNegative (talk) 05:33, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

I didn't find any notable faults with the remainder of the article. ResMar 02:30, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

• Thank you for your fixes and suggestions. DrNegative (talk) 05:33, 4 February 2012 (UTC)