Wikipedia:Peer review/Appartement du roi/archive1
Appartement du roi[edit]
- A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for July 2008.
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I've listed this article for peer review for editing pursuant to Wiki MOS and appropriate criteria for listed project inclusions.
Thanks, E. Lighthart (talk) 14:34, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: I will say some of the same things here I said at Wikipedia:Peer review/L'Opéra of the Palace of Versailles/archive1 Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here.
- The article needs to be divided into sections - the first section will be the Lead section, which is required as a overview and summary of the whole article. See WP:LEAD. I think other sections could be on the history and perhaps subsections on each room.
- Why are the French phrases not all translated in the infobox (some are and some are not)? This is the English Wikipedia
- The article has too many images and galleries / tables of images are frowned on in FAC - Template:Commonscat is one way to deal with this. A model article is useful for ideas and examples to follow - see some of the 65 articles in Category:FA-Class Architecture articles
- The map shows six rooms, plus the two courtyards. The article discusses eight rooms (at least), which is confusing.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 02:00, 12 July 2008 (UTC)