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Angels Ain't Listening

Short article about song "Angels Ain't Listening" by Swedish musician Basshunter. Article will be nominated to GA in the future. It passed GOCE in 2020. Eurohunter (talk) 15:53, 16 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

• Suggest expanding the lede to summarise/mention all sections in the article. See MOS:LEDE for more details.
  •  Comment: I expanded lead by addig two sentences. Eurohunter (talk) 22:18, 28 May 2023 (UTC)

• I suggest adding information about the album's reception in the lede. Z1720 (talk) 12:52, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
  •  Comment: I added information about chart. Eurohunter (talk) 15:47, 29 May 2023 (UTC)

• The "Professional ratings" chart only has one entry. Try finding additional ratings/reviews at WP:A/S to add to this chart.
  •  Comment: There is no any more ratings. Singles ratings are quite rare. Eurohunter (talk) 22:18, 28 May 2023 (UTC)

• Did the song place in any charts, perhaps in Sweden? Z1720 (talk) 12:52, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
  •  Comment: Yes, it charted on Swiss Dance Chart, so I added it to lead. Eurohunter (talk) 15:47, 29 May 2023 (UTC)

• Personal credits needs a reference.
  •  Comment: Are you sure? I probably never seen sourced section of credits in any of featured articles. Credits are already sourced in Background section.
    • See White Horse (Taylor Swift song), promoted to FAC on May 20, Me Too (Meghan Trainor song) promoted April 23, and Telephone (song) promoted April 16: the credits section in each articles has a citation at the top of the section, stating where the information about the credits are from. Z1720 (talk) 12:52, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
      •  Done. Added. Eurohunter (talk) 15:47, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
• Any additional personal credits that can be added, like people playing instruments, co-producers or music editors/engineers?
  •  Comment: All credits are already included. There are no more known credits. Eurohunter (talk) 22:18, 28 May 2023 (UTC)
• The infobox says the song is "Cold Wave" but this is not mentioned in the body of the article, nor is it cited. I suggest that information about the song's genre is added to the article body (probably under background)
  •  Done. Added. Eurohunter (talk) 22:18, 28 May 2023 (UTC)

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 13:20, 20 April 2023 (UTC)

@Z1720: Your comments have been noted, and I want to address issues as fast as possible, just I had no time to deal with it yet. I expect quick responses from others, so as fast as possible, I will let you know if I only take care of it. Thank you. Eurohunter (talk) 20:09, 10 May 2023 (UTC)

@Z1720: Issues has been taken into account. Some issues require further comments from you. Eurohunter (talk) 22:18, 28 May 2023 (UTC)

@Eurohunter: An additional comment: the reception section suffers from "X said Y" formatting. I suggest reading WP:RECEPTION for tips on how to avoid this. Replies above. Z1720 (talk) 12:52, 29 May 2023 (UTC)

@Z1720:  Comment: I added few variations. Eurohunter (talk) 15:47, 29 May 2023 (UTC)