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1984 Rajneeshee bioterror attack[edit]

1984 Rajneeshee bioterror attack was recently listed as a Good Article. The article cites (61) sources, and utilizes (4) free-use images. The article is stable. Looking for any feedback/comments to help improve the article further.

Thanks,

Cirt (talk) 02:51, 2 January 2008 (UTC).[reply]

  • Wow, came over from the Project - excellent article about an event I'd never even heard existed. My only qualm would be the main image - something more relevant to the actual people involved - rather than a microscopic image - would improve the initial response. Sherurcij 04:21, 2 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 01:49, 5 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Addressing points from semi-automated peer review

I will begin to address points from the semi-automated peer review, and make a note of it here, below. Cirt (talk) 09:16, 12 January 2008 (UTC).[reply]

  1. When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
    • Done - I went through the article but could not find instances of this. Cirt (talk) 09:21, 12 January 2008 (UTC).[reply]
  2. This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.[?]
    • Done - I think that this is something the bot picks up on a lot. I know it's a long article - but it is important that the history of the incident is discussed in one article, and not split apart. Cirt (talk) 09:22, 12 January 2008 (UTC).[reply]
  3. Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?] You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:46, 5 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • Will continue to copy-edit and seek out some fresh readers to take a look at the article as well. Cirt (talk) 09:22, 12 January 2008 (UTC).[reply]
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