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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by User:Gimmetrow 11:53, 7 August 2008 [1].

NBA All-Star Game Most Valuable Player Award[edit]

I am nominating this list with User:K. Annoyomous24 because we believe it should be promoted to a featured list.—Chris! ct 00:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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    • "[1], to " move comma to before ref.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "to the best player " no - to the player voted to have been the best?
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "award given since the 1953 All-Star Game[1], to the best player of the annual All-Star Game. The award was established in 1953 when NBA officials decided to designate an MVP for each year's game. " these two sentences effectively say the same thing.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "The league also re-honor players from the previous two All-Star Games." every year? or just the once?
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "who cast vote after " their vote? their votes? do they get more than one each? a first/second/third?
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • Image captions look like complete sentences so need a full stop.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "NAME (X)" just "Player (X)" or "Name (X)" is fine. No need for all the SHOUTING.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Los Angeles Lakers (6)" - did you intend to add the number awarded to each team?
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • Eleven voters, how can you get joint winners? Needs explanation.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "The most recent winner..." - The 2008 winner.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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