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The list was not promoted 16:14, 8 May 2008.

List of The Bellflower Bunnies episodes[edit]

Peer review

Well, I hope this gives us the triple crown...

Sorry if I haven't been online that much this past week...owing much to trips to New York, Danbury and my library, not to mention a lot of maintenance on the new Wikia I've set up about this franchise. But can you tell me what more needs to be done? --Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 02:16, 27 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose by Dweller

Many varied problems, esp. with language/translation/lack of translation/inconsistencies...

"Since its premiere, TF1 has always been involved in the show's production" - awkward subject/object switching, could be simplified.
"Moran Caouissin directed the first four episodes, before his role went to Eric Berthier for the rest of its run." its run? Subject is the director's role
I don't know what this means: "The Bellflower Bunnies has aired on the TF! Jeunesse/TFOU block on its original station" What does "block" mean in this context? Is TF! a typo?
Wikilink first uses of Germany and German, as well as North America, Netherlands, South Korea and, erm, Quebec (which seems not be located in any country)
Ditto for Region 1 DVDs - in the image caption too for region 2
"As of May 2008, only twelve of these episodes have been released in six separate volumes." What does this mean? Which episodes? What's a "volume"?
"Original specials" what's so special about them?
Moran Caouissin is definitely not "an animator from DuckTales the Movie: Treasure of the Lost Lamp;" unless he's a fictional character, which I doubt
"Based on" isn't a very explanatory heading. I had to work out what was intended, which isn't ideal for featured material
Presumably "Air date" refers to the date of the first airing of the episode?
Your episode summaries should be labelled as such
Why are there spaces before the !s in the "based on" titles? Why is only the first of them wikilinked?
The FL criteria mention "images" (plural). Perhaps I'm pedantic, but I'd expect more than one in a FL.
Why does "Based on" disappear for Season 2?
Why no wikilinking in plot summaries?
Why is "Dandelion's Vanishing Vegetable Garden" translated, but other titles are not?
"But his submission, a water cycle, eventually gives him a lot of pressure from the villagers." I think "gives" is the wrong word
"Poppy goes for some cabbage from a distant greenhouse." What do you mean by "goes for"?
What does "Mistletoe soon takes the favour. " mean?
What's a "hare girl"?
"Mistletoe practises his father Bramble's beekeeping job" Maybe beekeeping is extremely prestigious in France, but in England while one might practise law or medicine, I don't think you'd use the verb for beekeeping
"during the young Bellflowers' attraction" I think "attraction" is the wrong word

...I stopped there. Needs a rethink and definitely a copyedit. I suspect some of the problems have been caused by translation from French (I could be wrong) but a copyeditor can smooth these over. --Dweller (talk) 15:07, 6 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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