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Johnny Winter discography[edit]
Johnny Winter discography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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Blues rocker Johnny Winter was a one-of-a-kind and his discography had a few twists and turns. This has been in the works for over a year and covers all of his recorded output, is carefully sourced and meets all the criteria. Hope you find it interesting & informative. —Ojorojo (talk) 16:43, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Comments by Alexandra
- The picture in the lead lacks alt text
never remaining at any one for more than two or three albums
, so sometimes remaining for more than two - change to "for more than three albums"- Notes that are complete sentences should end with a period; ones that are sentence fragments are fine as is (see WP:CAPFRAG for details)
- The King of Slide and The Woodstock Experience should sort as "King of Slide, The" and "Woodstock Experience, The"
- Same goes for all the items under "Compilation albums" that begin with "The"
- Otherwise, this looks good - please ping me when you have addressed the above and I will take another look!--AlexandraIDV 17:11, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @Alexandra IDV: Thanks, done. —Ojorojo (talk) 17:53, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:29, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:29, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from HAL333 19:31, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply] |
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Everything else looks great.~ HAL333 20:40, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply] |
Comments
- "45 rpm record single" record single reads odd to me. One or the other but not both.
- Could tell us what that single was!
- "recorded" used three times in three sentences makes for repetitive reading.
- " to Columbia Records.[1] With Columbia" repetitive.
- "the main American record charts" but you only mention (and list in the table) one, the Billboard 200.
- "remaining at any" remaining with any?
- I don't follow the last sentence of the lead at all. What was the "discography situation" that having a three-year break made more complicated?
- Worth noting that his last studio album was a posthumous release?
- Not clear why italics is required as well as the asterisk, it makes the numbers crash into the symbol making it harder to read. Also makes the double asterisk even harder to delineate."
- Sortable tables means everything that's linked should be linked every time. My advice: make them unsortable. I'm not sure what sorting adds here.
- "Billboard's" not sure that 's should be in italics.
- Isn't the chart called "Top Blues Albums"?
- "c.1961" normally a space after c.
- I would order the infobox the same as the sections, i.e. Bootlegs before singles.
- Why isn't, e.g. The Best of Johnny Winter notable enough to be linked as it hit 11 on the charts?
- Albums may appear in a specialty chart, but only receive a brief mention in a review or bio and may not meet the significant coverage criterion (and not "enough material to warrant a reasonably detailed article"). Also, compilations are often discontinued/replaced after a few years, so may be unlikely to receive any further coverage. —Ojorojo (talk) 17:54, 2 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- ""Rock and Roll, Hoochie Koo"" needs an en-dash in the chart place column before that footnote about Canada.
- "Albums as producer and/or guitarist" section, Billboard in table heading needs italics.
- Concert videos not mentioned in the infobox.
- Ref 41 needs spaced en-dash, not hyphen.
That's it from me. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:04, 1 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: I'm going to come back to the lead. Meanwhile, how about moving the other charts and the unlinked albums? —Ojorojo (talk) 17:54, 2 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review — Pass[edit]
Will do soon. Aza24 (talk) 09:19, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Formatting
Bibliography
- Your locations are inconsistent, either include all or none of them, just needs to be consistent
References
- ref 24 has a different year then biblo, not sure which is right
- some of the page numbers, such as refs 24, 86, 95, 115 are missing periods
- Fixed. Template:Sfn automatically adds a period, while Template:Harvnb doesn't. —Ojorojo (talk) 14:56, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Reliability
- I see no issues here; AllMusic has a history of trusted critics, and non-authored links are just statistical information Aza24 (talk) 06:32, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Verifiability
Promoting. --PresN 03:53, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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