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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by User:Matthewedwards 20:13, 1 November 2008 [1].

Daft Punk discography[edit]

Nominating - A State Of Trance (talk) 02:55, 17 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • Make "This is the discography of Daft Punk" more interesting
  • "Paris-born musicians Guy-Manuel de Homem-Christo and Thomas Bangalter met in 1987." – perhaps mention the fact that they also formed Daft Punk?
  • "album, Discovery was " – "album, Discovery, was "
  • "Concurrently production" – "Concurrent production", and Concurrent probably isn't the best word, anyways
  • "2001 also saw the" – don't begin sentences with numbers

Gary King (talk) 04:32, 17 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All  Done - A State Of Trance (talk) 05:11, 17 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Just a side note: Daft Punk was not "formed" in 1987 - they simply met then, in school. just64helpin (talk) 14:00, 17 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • "Material shot for an eventually-canceled video was reworked and expanded to create the feature film Daft Punk's Electroma." No hyphen after -ly adverbs.
  • "In the summer of 2006 the duo performed live for the first date of what would become their worldwide 2006 and 2007 tours." Comma after 2006.
  • For albums that did not chart, use em dashes instead of hyphens and make a note of what they mean, like at Rachel Stevens discography.
  • Why is there a section about the Grammy Awards? That should be in an article about the awards and nominations received.
  • Reference 1 needs publisher info.
  • In the Music videos section Daft Punk is overlinked.
  • "While marketed and broadcast on television as music videos," "While"-->Although. Dabomb87 (talk) 14:27, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
All  Done - A State Of Trance (talk) 16:22, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the duo performed live for the first date of" What does "first date" mean in this context? Dabomb87 (talk) 22:38, 26 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
 Done - A State Of Trance (talk) 15:51, 27 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Please allow your high-value links to stand out, and delink French
  • Where are the references for Peak Chart Positions?
  • According to List of record charts, Finland, Sweden and Switzerland have articles about their album charts. Same for the singles table. It's inconsistent to link to the articles about the countries
  • Merge the singles certifications into the table, as it is with the albums one
  • The tracks they remixed, do they have any official names, or are they all like "Take Me Out (Daft Punk Remix)"?
  • Could you provide years and possibly the releases the remixes appeared on?
  • Do they have any songs that appear exclusively on any compilations or soundtracks?

Matthewedwards 21:02, 28 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose:

  • All chart positions need to be referenced by reliable sources
  • Home video → Video albums
The "Home video" section contains Daft Punk's Electroma, which is not a video album. just64helpin (talk) 03:28, 30 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • All music video directors should be referenced by reliable sources
  • Place live albums & compilation albums in separate tables
  • Add catalog numbers and release formats
  • U.K. → UK
  • U.S. → US
I believe the practice is to use "U.S." or "USA" to disambiguate from the word "us".

-- Underneath-it-All (talk) 02:37, 30 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Source comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • Ref 28 needs a publication date.
  • IMBD is not a reliable source.
  • On ref 9, the words in the access date are running together.
  • Links check out with link checker. Dabomb87 (talk) 03:39, 30 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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