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Chameli Devi Jain Award for Outstanding Women Mediaperson[edit]

Chameli Devi Jain Award for Outstanding Women Mediaperson (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Yashthepunisher (talk) 10:15, 2 July 2019 (UTC) & DiplomatTesterMan[reply]

This is a comprehensive list of one of India's leading journalistic award. As usual, hope to receive constructive feedback's. Thank you. Yashthepunisher (talk) 10:15, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • I don't think I'm experienced enough to do a full review, but the first thing that jumps out is missing alt texts from the two images in Recipients section.
  • Space after comma in "Since it's inception in 1981,".
  • Some explanation for why it wasn't awarded in 1987 would be good.
Reference given. It is not specific in the book as to why the award wasn't given that year.
  • Some earlier entries in "Associated media houses" section are empty, but newer ones contain "Independent Journalist". Is Independent Journalist name of an organisation?
I could not find proper sources for them. Independent journalists mean journalists who do not work under any organisation. Sort of freelance. Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:29, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I think it needs to be consistent. If they weren't associated with any organisation, then it should be either Independent Journalist or empty across the board. Maybe an en dash. But it needs to be consistent. TryKid (talk) 14:04, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

TryKid (talk) 11:28, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

TryKid Done. Thanks. Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:41, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
That was fast, Yashthepunisher. I've added two more points. TryKid (talk) 11:45, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
TryKid Please have a look now. Yashthepunisher (talk) 15:07, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support: Looks great to me. TryKid (talk) 15:15, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment - is the award called "Chameli Devi Jain Award for Outstanding Women Mediapersons" or "Chameli Devi Jain Award for Outstanding Women Mediaperson"? The title and the first sentence do not agree..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:17, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
ChrisTheDude Renamed article name. Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:29, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from zmbro
  • Infobox still says "Mediapersons" (as I'm currently looking at it)
  • Table needs scope rows
  • Ref. → Ref.
  • Ref col would look better centered
  • Why was there no winner in 1987?
  • Should probably archive all website refs

Rest looks good. – zmbro (talk) 17:17, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Zmbro I haven't been able to find a source that specifically mentions the reason behind no award in 1987. The rest has been fixed. Thanks for your queries. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:43, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "Chameli Devi Jain Award for Outstanding Women Mediaperson is" => "The Chameli Devi Jain Award for Outstanding Women Mediaperson is"
  • "a Indian journalistic award" => "an Indian journalistic award"
  • Italicise Business Standard
  • Don't italicise The Media Foundation
  • "The award was instituted at an initiative" - no idea what this means, can you elaborate?
  • "The criteria for selection includes" => "The criteria for selection include"
  • "journalists in regional Indian language" => "journalists in regional Indian languages"
  • "A Pakistani journalist, Rehana Hakim, won the award in 1996." - why is this significant? Is it because she is the only Pakistani winner to date? If so, make that clearer?
Remove the entire sentence. It isn't of much significance.
  • "Priyanka Dubey of BBC" => "Priyanka Dubey of the BBC"
  • Caption on first image has "the the"
  • The same caption should not have the award name italicised
  • Why no winner in 1987?
  • ref column should be centred
  • Is there a standard English-language name for the award? Currently the title is "Chameli Devi Jain Award for Outstanding Women Mediaperson" which isn't grammatically correct English. Some of the refs use alternative titles such as "Chameli Devi Jain Award for Outstanding Woman Journalist" Business Standard themselves (ref 38) seem to just call it "Chameli Devi Jain Award"
ChrisTheDude The original title is ""Chameli Devi Jain Award for Outstanding Women Mediaperson" which is widely used by most sources. Some refs use the shorter name, the "Chameli Devi Jain Award". I have also come across some refs that mention it as "...Journalist", but they are few and far between. Yashthepunisher (talk) 16:05, 5 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

HTH -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:47, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • One other thing I noticed - the name column sorts on first name (e.g. Alka Dhupkar sorts under A). It should sort on surname.... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:28, 8 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
ChrisTheDude Done. Yashthepunisher (talk) 12:06, 8 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source review –

  • The title of reference 2 could use an en dash for the year range.
  • Ref 9 needs an access date.
  • Ref 10 is missing a publisher.
  • Refs 11 and 19 need page numbers.
  • Source reliability looks okay, and the link-checker tool doesn't show any problems. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:19, 8 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Giants2008 All done. Please have a look. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:13, 9 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The issues have all been resolved. I'd say the source review is a pass now. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:05, 10 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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