User talk:Student30

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Image without license[edit]

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File source problem with File:Jack M. Kartush MD Photo.jpg[edit]

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Confirming that I own file. Thank you

File:Jack M. Kartush MD Photo.jpg listed for discussion[edit]

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File:Jack M. Kartush MD Photo.jpg listed for discussion[edit]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jack M. Kartush (August 25)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Shadowowl was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Some sections of this article suffer from WP:CITEKILL, while other sections are entirely unsourced.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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» Shadowowl Marcos Rodriguez | t | SPI | AIV | Sandbox | Helpdesk » 17:21, 25 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Student30, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! » Shadowowl Marcos Rodriguez | t | SPI | AIV | Sandbox | Helpdesk » 17:21, 25 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Jack M. Kartush has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jack M. Kartush. Thanks! DGG ( talk ) 03:17, 8 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Jack M. Kartush[edit]

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Jack M. Kartush, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Reply[edit]

Thanks for your message. I see that nearly all your edits have been on this highly promotional bio. You have an obvious conflict of interest, you must declare it. please don't write about yourself, your friends or relatives. If you work directly or indirectly for him or an affiliated organisation, or otherwise are acting on his behalf, you are very strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. If you are paid directly or indirectly by him or his organisation, you are required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:Student30. The template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=Student30|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. If you are being compensated, please provide the required disclosure. Note that editing with a COI is discouraged, but permitted as long as it is declared. Concealing a COI can lead to a block. Please do not edit further until you respond to this message. Also read the following regarding writing an article

When you write about a person, you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls. Much of the text was completely unsourced, or referenced to ⋅primary sources, which are not acceptable, especially when many are written by him, and are clearly not independent third-party sources.
You must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews, such as Kartush played an important role in the history of facial nerve monitoring... He had a life long [sic] interest in innovation... As a ten-year-old child, he submitted his first patent... his interest in innovation continued.
There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
You must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient. I haven't checked the text for copyright, but there may be issues with some of the images if it's recreated

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article.

He is clearly notable, but as the reviewers said ...The real problem is that the article in its extensive detail is essentially a laudatory promotional biography. His work is important, and he could be easily shown notable, but the article must be condensed to about 1/10 the current size in order to have a proper WP:Neutral point of view... That will also prune the list of sources down to what is appropriate for the bio of a researcher... Some sections of this article suffer from WP:CITEKILL, while other sections are entirely unsourced.

The original version was deleted even as a draft because it was highly promotional and largely unsourced or sourced to unacceptable primary publications. You would do much better to write a shorter factual article with proper references from scratch, rather than try to create something from very poor previous version. However, before you edit on this topic, you must declare your COI as requested above. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 11:07, 5 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]