User talk:Miaonl
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:18, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
Peer review[edit]
Hi,
I just completed your peer review. Please check it out here: User:Miaonl/Cleveland indigenous activism/Kardon99 Peer Review. Good work so far!
--Kardon99 (talk) 04:19, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
Hey! I really like how you cover a large span of time and how it cumulated into 2020 movements. Including the history and establishment of protest organizations provided necessary information that you later build upon. Overall, this article is well done, and my suggestions are very minor.
Beginning with the lead, I would be sure to include all major headings. I do not know if it is controversial, but I would also look into capitalizing the "i" in Indigenous. Instead of saying "recent protests in Cleveland resulted...," try to give a specific time frame because the article will age. In the lead, you touch on the Indian relocation Act of 1956, but you never specify which tribes were relocated to Cleveland with the Indian Relocation Act of 1956. I think this is a valuable addition because it would specify which nations we are discussing. You also bring up Jay's Treaty, but I had a few questions as to why they cited Jay's Treaty. Why is it important; did it give consent for Native peoples to cross the border freely? It would be helpful to explicitly state why they cited it. Later in the article you say, "Apologize publicly to indigenous people for ignoring and marginalizing us for the last 5 decades, and for a century of a harmful decisions which were exploitative and dehumanizing." Should "us" be them? Structurally, I think the local schools section should go above the Cleveland baseball information due to chronology of the name change. Again these are all minor edits, and I found this well-written and super interesting! I learned a ton from this article, and I cannot wait for others to read it!
(A fun little side note, but someone class in the is doing "Columbus Quincentenary," so later you can link them in your article when you discuss the Committee of 500 Years of Dignity and Resistance. :) ) Katey.P (talk) 21:29, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
Peer Review of Cleveland indigenous activism Article[edit]
Hello,
I just completed a peer review of your article "Cleveland indigenous activism." Your article was extremely well-structured, and provided great insight into the history of indigenous peoples in the Great Lakes region. Good job!!
Jcichoke (talk) 02:51, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
Incomplete DYK nomination[edit]
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DYK nomination of Cleveland Indigenous activism[edit]
Hello! Your submission of Cleveland Indigenous activism at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) at your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Wasted Time R (talk) 13:38, 7 November 2020 (UTC)
DYK for Cleveland Indigenous activism[edit]
On 19 November 2020, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Cleveland Indigenous activism, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that Cleveland Indigenous activist Sundance successfully petitioned Oberlin High School in Ohio to change its school mascot from the Indians to the Phoenix in 2007? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Cleveland Indigenous activism. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, Cleveland Indigenous activism), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.