User talk:Lorheng

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16:02, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

NPOV tag[edit]

I've received your message about the NPOV tag. I'll answer it here on your talk page since this is were most routine communication takes place. I placed the tag on the article because I felt it didn't quite represent its subject in a neutral way. Two examples of this include: wise and prudent management ... and Chip Mong has attained prominence as a leader .... Part of the problem might be that the background section is sourced from the company's website. What you can do to remedy this issue is to rewrite the article in a strictly neutral and densely sourced fashion. This entails having a source for every claim you make and avoiding overly positive language. I would also recommend against linking the company's website in the main text. Best, Modussiccandi (talk) 10:04, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chip Mong moved to draftspace[edit]

Are you associated with this company, or are they paying you to write an article? Please see WP:COI and WP:UPE to learn how to address those concerns, I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. Once you address those concerns, and when you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 13:50, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. Just saw your email. I usually don't respond via email unless there is some type of privacy issue, which isn't the case here. Of course I don't mind questions. First, here on your talk page you need to address the potential COI/UPE concerns. Use the links above to see how to handle that. Another editor (above) also found the article not to be neutral, and gave good suggestions. Remember that WP is an encyclopedia, not an advertising forum. Just state facts, don't embellish, get rid of phrases like "With a strong foundation....", and be wary of simply listing products/services, which act like a promotional brochure. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 11:27, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi ^{TT me},

I have summited my article for view and also stated the COI. However, at the bottom of article I saw a part called Categories containing 3 messages:

Pending AfC submissionsAfC
pending submissions by age/20 days ago
AfC submissions by date/04 May 2021

Is there any action I should complete toward these messages? Lorheng

Your submission at Articles for creation: Khmer Beverages (June 9)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Khmer Beverages and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Khmer Beverages, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

KylieTastic (talk) 19:46, 9 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chip Mong (July 23)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Nightenbelle was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Piece sounds like an advertisement and most of the sources are publicity- not independent secondary sources not funded or sponsored by the company.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Chip Mong and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Chip Mong, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Nightenbelle (talk) 21:02, 23 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Khmer Beverages[edit]

Hello, Lorheng. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Khmer Beverages, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 07:03, 10 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Khmer Beverages[edit]

Hello, Lorheng. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Khmer Beverages".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 06:40, 10 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Chip Mong[edit]

Hello, Lorheng. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Chip Mong, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 22:02, 23 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Chip Mong[edit]

Hello, Lorheng. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Chip Mong".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 22:52, 23 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Draft feedback[edit]

Hello Lorheng

Please click here to view my changes. Please read what the changes were and their edit summary at the top, and keep clicking Next edit at the top of the page to view the next edit. Please continue to click 'Next edit' until the button disappears. (This will help you understand what needed to be corrected , and you will learn how to format sources and what information to write from them.)
This appears to be a large company: for example, its Beverages subsidiary reported as 'number one or number two' in the country. Could you please find a source to verify this objectively? This would help with establishing notability, which is the main criteria for approval of the draft. Here is a search tool:
Find sources: Google (books · news · scholar · free images · WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL
Has anyone reviewed the company in detail - at an independent source - rather than reading what the company CEO says about itself? This would be more reliable than reading the company's own promotional material. One or two detailed independent sources are required for publication.

Please let me know if you need help with any of the above. --Gryllida (talk, e-mail) 20:33, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Chip Mong[edit]

Hello, Lorheng. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Chip Mong".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 02:08, 2 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]