User talk:Laurnicole17/Grassroots Lobbying

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Starting[edit]

Hello guys, looks like you've gotten off to a slow, but steady start at the article. Good work so far. There are some places where fine-tuning is needed, but I'll let you focus on developing the article first. Regards, Yes Michael?Talk 09:46, 26 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Article structure[edit]

Greetings,

Glad to see that you guys are planning to redo the current draft. Here is my take on what you can do:

  • Work on article structure: It would be a good idea to work on the outline of the article; make notes on what sections should be there in the article, and decide which sections deserve more importance than the others. Make sure none of them get undue coverage.
  • Work on getting sources: Since you are three in number, probably one of you can work solely on this; get references for the sections you are planning to write.
  • Since you are three in number, it would probably be easier if you split up the work. It is up to you to decide how to split up. One of you can stick to collecting sources, and the two can write, or else, all three can write and collect sources simultaneously.
  • Don't worry too much about language, or tone; we can fine tune that when we actually have something to work on.

These are some of the points, probably upon which you can build upon. If you have any queries, or any ideas of your own, please write them down here. Regards, Yes Michael?Talk 03:49, 4 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Note: I have internal assessment work till the 9th of April at my Engineering college. The tests are sucking all the life out of me :( . Anyway, talk page messages may not get a timely response. I will get back when the tyranny at college is over. Hope you have fun at lab. Regards, Yes Michael?Talk 12:43, 5 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]