User talk:Laschke/sandbox

The diagram is licensed as CC and actually already in Wikimedia. If you click on the image, it will give credit to the original author and licensing information. I also went in and cleaned up the last section. Let me know if anything else should be adjusted.

Laschke (talk) 17:30, 1 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback[edit]

@Laschke, Dundermifflinthisispam, and K.bontje:

Nice work on your draft. Some changes you should still make before moving live

You need to make sure that each statement in the article can be connected to a source. The lead is fine (as long as everything in the lead section is covered in the body of the article) but everything else should have references. I have added {{citation needed}} tags in places where you should have citations, but don't currently.
Your first reference is missing. If you click on the ^[1] it takes you to a blank reference. I suspect that the actual reference got deleted at some point in the editing process. The easiest thing to do would just be to add the reference again.
Consider linking terms that the average reader might not be familiar with. The first section is fairly well linked, but beyond that, I think the only link was the one I added.
References go after punctuation, not before. Section headers should use sentence capitalization (only capitalize the first word and proper nouns) not title capitalization.

Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:20, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]