User talk:Lahnano

Hi! I'm Andi. We are asked to introduce ourselves once we complete the training, so here I am.Andikaylynn (talk) 18:41, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

Articles

• Severe Weather

This one is a surprisingly good article to work on, I think. It's last major revision occurred in 2012 with most of the work being done in 2010 but it still clearly isn't a great article despite being well-sourced and with extensive conversation about the organization and such. I think some of what you'll have to do here is to make this read like a Wiki article while keeping all the info in place. It also needs a lot of clean up just in terms of how it looks, which seems to be part of what you have a good eye for. Etherfire (talk) 16:34, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

• Act (drama)

This one is good I think but you might need to add some info/sources for it to really get moved along. Most importantly the article needs to be clarified in terms of shape and purpose (this is already some of what is discussed on the talk page) Etherfire (talk) 16:34, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

• The Sims (video game)

You aren't the first to consider this article. At first I was hesitant because it is long but it does have potential especially since it is strange that such a major game hasn't gotten up to GA status. I'm going to throw it in the possible articles but not assign it to you yet so that you can make the choice and leaves it open for others if you don't want it. Etherfire (talk) 16:34, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

Articles Needing Improvement

Organized religion

• no neutrality
• very short
• not very well informed

Grocery Store

• talk page indicates a few changes that could be made
• info could be reorganized as more is added

Week 3

Problems with Articles

Seahorse

This article could use some work as far as layout goes. It's rated C-class so just some light copyediting can be done to improve it.

Tasks

• Change up order of content
• proofread for errors and correct as I go

Severe Weather

This article also needs some copyediting and rearrangement of the layout to help it flow better.

Tasks

• change up order of content, possibly combine some things
• proofread for errors and correct as I go

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Hello, Lahnano, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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