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Your submission at Articles for creation: Families Are Forever (December 15)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Robert McClenon were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft has no references. Notability cannot be established without references. See WP:Markup for how to mark section headings. Section headings are delimited by equal signs (=), which are used to construct the table of contents of a page. It is not necessary or useful to put headings in bold face.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 20:24, 15 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Kaylavelloso! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 20:24, 15 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Families Are Forever (December 24)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

This submission appears to be taken from https://familyproject.sfsu.edu/news-announce/families-are-forever-shows-journey-devout-mormon-parents-accept-young-gay-son. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably-free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure. Note to reviewers: do not leave copyright violations sitting in the page history. Please follow the instructions here.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

Draft:Families Are Forever may be deleted at any time unless the copied text is removed. Copyrighted work cannot be allowed to remain on Wikipedia.
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Atlantic306 (talk) 19:19, 24 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Families are Forever has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Families are Forever. Thanks! Whispering^(t) 21:39, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Families are Forever (January 3)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Nathan2055 was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Not enough sources as is, either try and find some more to pass WP:NFILM or consider adding this info to Vivian Kleiman.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Families are Forever and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Families are Forever, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Nathan2055^{talk - contribs} 22:23, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Families are Forever (January 5)[edit]

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by David.moreno72 was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: Does not satisfy WP:NFILM

David.moreno72 00:21, 5 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: My Body's My Business (January 23)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ReaderofthePack was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This needs to be edited for tone, as this comes across as a promotion for the film. It does seem like it's notable given that it's mentioned in two academic sources, but this just needs to be almost completely re-written. I recommend looking over existing film articles to get an idea of how the article should be written. This could also use more sourcing to help back up claims and better establish notability. Also, be extremely, extremely careful when quoting things like this. Bio quotes are often cherrypicked and fine tuned so that they look as positive as possible. Sometimes these quotes are exactly as they appear, other times they're taken somewhat or entirely out of context and give off an impression that isn't accurate to the source material. Bio quotes also leave out things that would be vital to know, such as whether or not the speaker or organization making the quote is affiliated with the person in the bio - essentially, if they're affiliated with the person then they're more likely to say nice things because it reflects well on them. Always try to find the original source for bio quotes.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 01:52, 23 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Note[edit]

I wanted to direct you towards this brochure on editing and creating film articles on Wikipedia. My workplace created it so I can vouch for it. Also, I highly recommend going through something like WP:ADVENTURE, which goes over the various guidelines on Wikipedia, and checking out WP:FILM - a WikiProject dedicated to editing film and film related articles on Wikipedia. There is a task force devoted to documentary films as well but I'd start with the main film WikiProject. Also, definitely hit up the WP:TEAHOUSE since it's a great place to get advice and there's always someone there to give an answer. ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 01:59, 23 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Families Are Forever[edit]

Hello, Kaylavelloso. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Families Are Forever".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Lapablo (talk) 23:38, 5 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:My Body's My Business[edit]

Hello, Kaylavelloso. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "My Body's My Business".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 07:32, 27 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]